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Okay, so I was reading this rant on AsianFanFics.....



Yeah...a rant. So, I was reading it today, and I noticed a ton of things on there that were kind of hard for me to read because it made me feel bad as a writer. So anyway, off of that rant I got to several conclusions to things:



1. Maybe this person just stumbled upon some bad stories, you know? So, I can understand his/her reason for being disappointed in that. But there's so reason to go into a 60+ chapter rant about it.

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2. I noticed on chapter 26 or so, she claimed that there weren't enough stories about her biases and such. This problem is easily solved by writing her own damn fics.

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3. NOT. EVERYONE. ON. THIS. SITE. SPEAKS. FLUENT. ENGLISH!! I understand the bad grammar and such in a ton of fics, but you need to remember that not everyone is fluent in Enhlish. She suggested to get an editor. SOME. PEOPLE. HAVE. NO. GODDAMN. MONEY. FOR THAT!! Have some fucking mercy on those people -.-

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4. If someone would like to rant...at least do it politely. Seriously...calling writers 'assholes' and 'fuckers' gets you nowhere.

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5. Is this person even reading what she writes? She's seriously ranting on male pregnancy? Um...hello? It's a fanfic...A FICTIONAL STORY. If there are fangirls that wanna write about mpreg, then so be it. Just don't read the story then.

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6. I will admit that even though not everyone can write, one shouldn't necessarily put them all down. It takes time, patience, practice, and tons of brainstorming to write. I'll admit that as a fourteen-year-old...I'm not the greatest writer out there. But there is absolutely no reason for one such as herself to go ballistic about it.

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So, you can tell I was a little pissed when I read her rant. But really? Who does this person think she is? No...I'm not butt hurt because of what she said although it did make me feel slightly bad, but she shouldn't go ballistic over a fucking website that she chose to be on anyway. And does that girl even read what the hell she writes? Now, through her rants you can obviously tell she's demanding a perfect story from everyone. Well...



NOT EVERYONE CAN DO THAT!



Now I think it was chapter 26 in this girl's rant where she wrote about her biases. Here's part of what she said, and I quote:



"WHERE'S ALL THE LOVELY FANFICTIONS ABOUT MY LOVELY BABIES?! HUH?! WHY DON'T I SEE ANY PRECIOUS FANFICTIONS ABOUT MY SPECIAL BABIES, THE ONES WHO ARE MOST LOVELY?


You bitches out there, writing all about the commonly crushed on biases. What about the other people? Why are you disincluding my lovely babies? I'm sobbing to my death because of all you horribly narrow-minded, fat-faced, blinded, bastarded writers!

Why are all you people forgetting about the other members in the idol groups?  And I'm not talking about OTP couple fanfictions; I'm talking about actual fanfictions, where there's either another idol girl or there's an OC girl!

I hardly see any fanfictions about Sungjong! They're all about Sungjong looking so much like a girl and so he falls in love with one of the OTP couples! Gah! WHAT THE FUCK!?!

And if it's not an OTP couple, it's about Sungjong being a bad boy despite his girly and innocent appearance, and then there's all this flippin' smut!

And if there is an actual one about him, it's written in actual fucking shit! Why is my Sungjongie recieving such horrible treatment, and getting no fanfictions from you assholes?! Is it because he looks like a girl? Is it because he's not "manly" enough? Not sexy enough? BITCH PLEASE."

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Okay, first of all...TAKE A FUCKING CHILL PILL! Not everyone can please you. So....if you want more stories about your biases and OTPs, then write your own fucking fanfic about them! Don't try to demand others to write your fucking bias fics for you just because you want them. Now, I may sound harsh...BUT I DON'T GIVE A FLYING FUCK!!!



Seriously.... What is this fuckery that you have brought upon us? Why the fuck do you get so upset over the idols people choose to write about? Seriously. What the flying fuck? Do you know that since you have the fucking time to write a fucking rant you also have the goddamn time to write about the guy yourself? I came to AFF for several reasons. One of my reasons goes as states: I came to write for MY bias and MY OTP. You don't like it? Then fuck off.



Now the way she's like....demanding that more of her bias be written about makes me wanna hug her....with chains.....around her fucking neck along with some gasoline, lighters, and knives to bring eternal torment. ^-^



Seriously...fuck off of other peoples' backs and go write your own damn fanfic if you're that concerned about it.



So in conclusion to my angry rant tonight, I'll say this: Either you write a fucking perfect story your damn self or don't even come onto AFF if you're that dissapointed. Get the fuck off other peoples' backs about how they write and they way they are. And for God's sake...DON'T FUCKING RANT ABOUT YOUR BIAS BECAUSE THAT PROBLEM IS SO EASILY FUCKING FIXABLE!!





Yeah  my friend :iconlyrajohtostar: ranted about this girl that actually called people faggots, bitches etc just for writing MPreg fics and not enough fiics on her bias O__O If she wants to write about her bias; why doesn't SHE write it herself X3
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~ElegantCrystalWings 1 day ago  New member Student Traditional Artist
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Thank you for the fave :D

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Thanks for the fav on "Severus Snape: Serpent's Wisdom"

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Hey, how's MLP so far? x3
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~SakuraWarrirorGirl 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Ah I forgot to watch it sorry ^^;

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Thanks for the fave on Love is a odd thing
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~SnowWizard 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
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It's a K-Pop concert going on LIVE! I thought you might be interested. :3

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~SakuraWarrirorGirl 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhh I've heard of that concert ^^ I think it's SM Town or something. SM is the company where all the music artists work at but there are other's like JYP, YG etc. Man that's my dream right there...to see my fave groups live and in person V.V

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~SnowWizard 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. I didn't get to watch all of it though, because I had to go to bed.
I'm a baaaad kid. XD

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~SakuraWarrirorGirl 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
That's okay ^.^ Some of those concerts look pretty cool don't they?

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Thanks much for the fav~! :icontiffanyplz::iconsaranghaeplz:

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~TVnGames 5 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
One-Tail.
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Tobi's Tall Tales!
Badum, psssh.
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~SakuraWarrirorGirl 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
O__O What the heck is Badum? I'm familar with Tobi ^^;

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~TVnGames 5 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I dunno, lol
That's what he said in the dialogue. XD
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~SakuraWarrirorGirl 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhh you mean Tobi? O.O Weird...

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thanks for the fave!~ it means a lot to me.. :iconloveloveplz:

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*Somewhere in a dark portal*
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